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Posted: 26 Jul 2011, 15:37    Post subject: My stupid idea AKA, 1st SKC Fan fiction

HEEEEEEEEELLO!!!!
My name is Kevin, you know me as Phantomias in-game.
TODAY, I'm BORED!!! So, ill write a fan fiction!!!!

You: :shock: :x That sux!!!
Me: Maybe, but if you LIKE it, ill make moar. Remember, no one is forcing you to read, so Enjoy if you wish.

LordeTerras: This is gonna be dumb, but ill comment and say: EPIC!!!!!!!
(Lorde, that's 7 !'s)

So, let's begin!

MINOR CHARACTER NEEDED, not urgent
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Posted: 26 Jul 2011, 15:38    Post subject: Re: My stupid idea AKA, 1st SKC Fan fiction

Characters:
Kevin (Phantomias)
Bert (Nooob!)
Wolf (WolfGang)
Beanstalk (ProJura44)
Ryan (Ryan)

SPACE OPEN, answer to this topic if you want in


Minor characters: -NONE YET-


Character's cars:
Kevin: BMW M3 GTR (yes, the Most Wanted one)
Bert: Lamborghini Galardo (yellow I guess :P)
Wolf: Audi R8 (Carbon one, I guess?)
Beanstalk: Lamborghini Murcielago
Ryan: Ferrari 599 GTB Fiorano


Locations: LVPDHQ (Las Venturas Police Department Headquarters (initials overkill much?))
Waterloft Street (place where most illegal street races are held)


Feel free to suggest story parts, Critiscism welcome, F***s, S***s, GAYs not welcome!
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Posted: 26 Jul 2011, 15:39    Post subject: Chapters 1 through ?

Chapter One: The Partner

It was another one of Bert's usual days. He woke up at 7 AM, then made breakfast, cooked eggs and ham, he would also make his favorite drink, coffee.
He would leave for work at 7:40 AM. He would always drive his Lamborghini Gallardo out of the driveway, and drive north, to the LVPDHQ. Not only was his car a means of transportation, but it was also his work. He worked in the Illegal Activity department. He usually had work with drug dealers, thieves, and afcorce, street racers. His dad was also a cop, but in his time there was no such thing as street racing. Bert would usually park on his reserved parking spot on the 2nd floor of the parking lot, which was located next to the LVPDHQ building. But that day was different from all the others. This time, the parking spot next to his wasn't empty, as per usual. That day there was a car parked on that spot. It was a BMW M3 GTR, of blue and white colors. Bert locked his car, and went down the elevator. He then entered the LVPDHQ building, and walked up to his office. In his office were two desks. One was Bert's, and the other one was empty, so Bert used it to stack boxes of papers, with criminal records. But that day, there were no boxes on that table, instead, there was an opened box, and inside it were some things that you would usually find in a policeman's office, for example, some papers, pens, a laptop and excetera.
Bert rushed to the chief's office. He opened the door to the chief's office, and inside, he found two people. The first one was the chief. The chief was talking to second person. That person was unknown to Bert. That person was about 1,90 meters tall, looked like he was in his mid-twenties, had short dark brown hair, and wore a red jacket, a lime green shirt, and some blue jeans. Once Bert closed the door behind himself, the chief and the other man looked at him.
The chief started talking to Bert:

Chief: Bert, have a seat.
Bert: I'd rather stand.
Chief: Well, OK I guess. Meet Kevin.

Kevin streched his hand in order to shake Bert's hand, but Bert ignored him. The chief continued talking:

Chief: Bert, Kevin is going to be your new partner.

Once he heard those words, Bert burst into into anger and rage. He yelled:

Bert: Chief, you can't be serious!!! I work solo!!!
Chief: Calm down Bert, and listen to me. Look, you didn't want a partner ever since that car crash with you and Dan. Ever since Dan died, you went solo, but now that has to change.
Bert: B-but chief!! I...
Chief: Look Bert, Kevin passed through the police academy with flying colors! We can't let an opportunity like this just slip out of our grasp!
Bert: But Chief!!!
Chief: No but's. It's either this, or you are going BACK to traffic police!
Bert: Fine!

Bert left the office mumbling to himself. Kevin went after him, and stopped him. Bert told him:

Bert: Look kid, you DON'T have experience like me, so from now on, you follow MY rules, and listen to ME! Got it?
Kevin: I guess so. By the way could you show me around the building?
Bert: Okay, I guess I could. Follow me.

The chief left his office, and looked at Bert and Kevin. He said to himself:

Chief: Poor kid, with Bert, he is for one wild ride.

-END OF CHAPTER ONE-

P.S. I don't know if you guys like this, this was just the intro to the story, more to come, feel free to reply if you like!



Chapter Two: Blood Rush

A Blood Rush, the most dangerous type of street race known to man. It's rules: Drive two miles down the bustling Waterloft street, whilst driving in the wrong lane. The person who reaches the finish line first, or the only one to SURVIVE, wins the whole money pot, or the duelist's pink slip. You had to have guts to participate in this type of race. The LVPD tryed to stop this racing, but with no success. One day, the race was to be held at 3 PM, when most of the world's workforce would head home. The racers that day were getting ready. They were Wolf, the pro who drove the Audi R8, and

-MORE COOMING SOON, I NEED REST, EXPECT IT VERY SOON-
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Posted: 26 Jul 2011, 15:48    Post subject: Re: My stupid idea AKA, 1st SKC Fan fiction

one more reservation, just in case
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Posted: 26 Jul 2011, 15:53    Post subject: Re: My stupid idea AKA, 1st SKC Fan fiction

IM BERT :D
Wanted PINK car :D
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Posted: 26 Jul 2011, 16:11    Post subject: Re: My stupid idea AKA, 1st SKC Fan fiction

Reservation, but its broke, cause Nooob! made a reply, so please, Noooob!, please delete that reply
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Posted: 26 Jul 2011, 16:15    Post subject: Re: My stupid idea AKA, 1st SKC Fan fiction

I dont wanna be annoying but, how about you write it in a text file and when you are done you post it in once?
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Posted: 26 Jul 2011, 16:16    Post subject: Re: My stupid idea AKA, 1st SKC Fan fiction

hmm, I don't get it :?


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Posted: 26 Jul 2011, 16:24    Post subject: Re: My stupid idea AKA, 1st SKC Fan fiction

it'll be writen in chapters, so no .txt files :S
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Posted: 26 Jul 2011, 16:36    Post subject: Re: My stupid idea AKA, 1st SKC Fan fiction

his name is beanstalk LOL
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Posted: 26 Jul 2011, 16:39    Post subject: Re: My stupid idea AKA, 1st SKC Fan fiction

Whenever you think it can't get any crazier....

Edit: Keep making them though. This is strangely intriguing for some reason.



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Posted: 26 Jul 2011, 16:52    Post subject: Re: My stupid idea AKA, 1st SKC Fan fiction

People wont stop amazing you
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Posted: 26 Jul 2011, 16:59    Post subject: Re: My stupid idea AKA, 1st SKC Fan fiction

What. The. Fuck.
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Posted: 26 Jul 2011, 17:43    Post subject: Re: My stupid idea AKA, 1st SKC Fan fiction

Cooooooooooooollll :D

x bert <3
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Posted: 26 Jul 2011, 18:06    Post subject: Re: My stupid idea AKA, 1st SKC Fan fiction

PHANTOM my car will be: Ferrari 599 GTB Fiorano


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Posted: 26 Jul 2011, 18:49    Post subject: Re: My stupid idea AKA, 1st SKC Fan fiction

Thanks mate :D


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Posted: 26 Jul 2011, 19:00    Post subject: Re: My stupid idea AKA, 1st SKC Fan fiction

wat

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Posted: 26 Jul 2011, 20:44    Post subject: Re: My stupid idea AKA, 1st SKC Fan fiction

wut the fuck? :o
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Posted: 26 Jul 2011, 21:04    Post subject: Re: My stupid idea AKA, 1st SKC Fan fiction

is it worth reading then?
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Posted: 26 Jul 2011, 21:45    Post subject: Re: My stupid idea AKA, 1st SKC Fan fiction

Obviously not.
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